Friday, 20 July 2012

Adam's Final Fan Fiction

Hi guys, welcome to my fan fiction. My name is Adam and I don’t own anything expect for my laptop which is used to write this piece of work. This is my first fan fiction story, I have spent some time to sort out the story line of my story “Thor2, The memories of past and now”. So please try to enjoy it and you are welcome to comment some feed backs which I can use to improve this fan fiction story.

(Story set after Thor the movie, what will happen after next?)

This will be the fisrt chapter of my Thor fan fiction, ( Memories ).

Today is an honorable day for the Asgardians, people celebrating their good king “Thor’s” tenth anniversary of being the king of Asgard. Loud as ever, drinking wines and feasting on foods on long tables around Thor. He is very happy, smiling with big grins on his face. As today, is also the day that the Bifrost Bridge begins to operate again.

Since Loki’s betrayal, our great king “Odin”  has passed the crown to his beloved son “Thor” due to his illness. It has been ten years, memories have become blurry and images within Thor’s mind have fainted through the pass of time, it has been a long time since Thor said his last farewell to Jane. All that he could remember from the past few years was hell, demons with fire around its body, its burning eyes looks as heartless as the dark elves that rains their arrow upon our city, and as cold as the frost giants who strikes their ice-spears into our brethrens’ heart.

Two years after Loki’s betrayal, Thor thought he has lost his beloved brother Loki forever. Who has fallen into the deep space with the broken pieces of Bifrost Bridge, which was shattered by his almighty hammer “Miolnir”.

 At a time of feasting, Odin, Thor and the rest of guardians felt their tables shaking, roaring sounds of some kind drawing near from the shattered Bifrost Bridge. Everyone stopped for a moment, while Thor makes his way to the balcony. He was shocked from what he has seen with his own eyes, standing still for a few moments, looking stunned. He then turns around and alerted everyone in the chamber that they are under some kind of invasion.

Odin, our king. On his walk to Thor, he seems to look very serious as some familiar feelings have come to his heart. Once he walked next to Thor, he knew what was going to happen next and what were they after, when he saw his old enemy “Hela” ruler of Hel. Riding on top of his hell horse, with flames like Sun burning around its body, as for Hela himself, carrying nothing but the deadly blue flames surrounded on his hair, leading armies of thousands followed by the burning steps of his mount. Odin then uses he great power to warns the Asgardians and locks all gates from the outer city of Asgard, keeping the villains from entering. He then calls upon his mighty spear and uses his power to send out signals to his allies, the Light elves from Alfheim, dwarves from Nidavellir and Asgardian's sister race from Vanaheim for support. Those were the three realms within the world tree “Yggdrasil” that has allied with Asgard, it was formed to drive Hela back into Hel from Midgard, which mortals call it Earth. Long before king Laufey, the frost giants.

Suddenly now, silenced for a moment. Grounds have stopped shacking, as if time has stopped itself. It has given our young prince the time to break out from the startle, as the great war of Asgard is about to begin. Hela have stopped the march by stopping his mount, just one step over the Bifrost Bridge, facing the outer city gate of Asgard. He uses his power to increase his volume and announced “my old friend Odin, I have come to take what belongs to me and my long sweet revenge from you and your people”. Thor did not take this taunt very well, he calls forward his mighty hammer and raged his way down in front of the outer gate. 


Now, standing face to face with the ruler of Hel. Deep in Thor’s heart, he knew now why his father has signaled for supports. From the top of castle, Hela seems to be normal sized as the rest when Thor was looking down from the balcony. Standing in front of him, a horse, double the size of normal, covered with fire, staring at Thor with its glowing red eyes. Riding on top is Hela, a muscular old man, bigger than king Laufey, wearing only broken fabrics around his waist. But Thor did not back down, he lifted his hammer and calls upon thunders, charging his Mjolnir with powers ready to attack. Hela was not feared by Thor’s little ability, sitting still on top of his mount, as if he is asking for Thor’s thunder bolt. Just before Thor make his move, Loki walked from the shadows behind Hela, greets his brother with an surprise attack. He launched a ice-lance covered with dark magic which he learnt from the dark elves, striking Thor’s chest, leaving his defenselesss on the ground, Just before Thor closes his eyes, half absent from his mind, everything has become clear in his mind. It was loki, his beloved brother...back for his evil revenge.....TO BE CONTINUED!

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