Friday, 20 July 2012

Adam's fan fiction draft


I will chose a source from either movie, tv show or ainme. Which would be Thor.
Outline of the story is the love story between Thor and ….(forgot her name) and her granddaughter in Earth.

After Thor had destroy the teleport machine to safe the Ice Giants from extinction which he also destroyed his only way of reaching back to his lover ….. on Earth.

In a blink of an eye, 50 years has passed. The …..(People from Thor’s planet) created a portal that opens a door to any other planet in the universe. After 50 years of  long wait, Thor’s pure love for ….still carries on blah blah blah…..Thro traveled through the portal to Earth to only find his loved … and passed away in her 79th birthday leaving the world with regrets of not able to meet Thor once again.  ( before Thor found out all that, he mat a girl who looked just like …. Which turns out to be ….’s granddaughter who is interested in this universe and continued her grandmothers legacy )

After …found out who Thor really is, she asked him why he didn’t show up before her grandma has passed. Then Thor started to explain what happened 50 years back.

( This is where introduction ends and starts the story )
After Loki’s betrayal, Kings from other galaxies gathered and united an army of fearless warriors to assault …..( Thor’s planet ). Taking revenge  from Odin, as he has taken all their powerful weapons to keep them from their greedy of conquering from planet to planet, destroying peace in universe.

Within three month of time, sixty thousands fearless  king of ….has passed his crown to Thro to protect and keep peace to their galaxy.

To be continued……


I have taken my time to do some background research about Thor, now that I have all the information needed for my fan fiction. Here is some ideas that I had before I started my FF.

Fifty years after Loki’s betrayal, the Bifrost Bridge has finally been fixed. Thor made his way back to Earth, where he first met Jane Foster at the desert of New Mexico. As Thor walked around the desert, he noticed nothing has changed until he made his way to the town. Where people wear differently, building looks smarter and shiner, vehicles are now floating on air. He walked around the desert and the town, but still couldn’t find the Jane’s lab. So he took his time and went to a burger shop for a big feast. Thor was then taken to the police station as he did not have the money to pay for his burgers, the polices could not find Thor on their personal profile system, which Thor’s dead brain had actual clicked for once. Saying himself as a relative of Jane Foster, which he soon found out that she has passed away in her seventies.


Later in that evening, Thor was taken to Jane’s house. He saw Jane’s granddaughter who looks exactly like Jane, who is also influenced by her grandmother. She carried on with Jane’s aurora borealis type phenomenon study. Thor couldn’t control his feelings and hugged Marry when she opened the door, as she was also attracted to his handsome strong man, just like her grandmother.

Few days later, after Marry has checked the story told by Thor with grandma Lewis ( Jane’s old friend )…..then Thor talked about his past and the time when first met Jane….

After Thor’s story, an evil Dark elf, uses his magic to track Thor since their loss in the great war of Asgard ( in Thor’s past story when he was telling it to Marry). Waiting for the perfect chance to strike him down. The dark elf wonders who Marry is, then read through her memory after on her way back home from lab. Then kidnapped Marry and threatens Thor to drop his mighty hammer a battle for Marry.

In the end Thor retrieved his hammer and used his thunder bolt ability to kill the dark elf.



3 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed the 2011 film adaptation of Thor, and this draft of yours looks like it could prove to be a very interesting love story!
    Hoping to see some drama in the mix, perhaps a failed attempt and not just a straight through success story. Look forward to the rest Adam.

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  2. omg!!!! this seems like a very nice story! i had fun reading the draft, its awesome!!!!!!!! please do finish it because i enjoyed every second of it. i liked the use of blah blah, it actually feels like I'm reading a humans work, if you know what i mean.. it seems like an honest down to earth story, i don't know if that makes sense to you.. but in conclusion it is a fantastic start!! =)

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  3. can't wait to read the final draft Adam,
    just a few questions, what's Thro? is it Thor or is it through?

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